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Actions speak louder than words searching for open ears
ready to listen to long-winded descriptions
of a bad day at the park.
It would have been a perfect day if only it hadn't have rained,
he wasn't there,
it was silent and the wind swept tears away from stained cheeks.
If I laid myself out on a silver table and let the doctors make incisions
into my chest to fix my broken heart,
I would die under the anaesthetic waiting for them to find all of the pieces.
©2004-2009 ~snoopy-dog
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This is a really great piece of poetry. It's sad but that's what makes it good. I love the last part:

If I laid myself out on a silver table and let the doctors make incisions
into my chest to fix my broken heart,
I would die under the anaesthetic waiting for them to find all of the pieces.

That's the best piece of writing I have ever read to describe what it's like to be heartbroken. What more can I say but that's it's a fav. :D
:iconsnoopy-dog:
wow :wow: !!!
thanks so much!!!!

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